A 9-point essay about a mother goes viral online; the most touching part is the teacher's feedback.

Not only did it demonstrate a rare keen observation for an elementary school student, but what made many people pause even longer was the teacher's loving comment.

Everywhere, the image of a mother always appears as something sacred and closest to each person. We all have our own ways of expressing love and gratitude to our mothers. For elementary school students, this feeling is further expressed through assignments and descriptive sentences that are the most innocent and genuine.

Vu Mai Huong (born in 2003, Hanoi ) has always cherished an essay she wrote about her mother, which received a 9 from her teacher when she was in 5th grade. Recently, she posted the essay on the social media platform Threads as a way to preserve the memory.

"Reading this again makes me love my mother so much. Back then, I was wiping away tears while writing because I felt so sorry for her," you wrote on your personal page.

The essay stands out with its purple ink, carefully written lines, and gentle sentences that reflect Mai Huong's keen observation of her mother. Her sincere feelings are evident in her choice of words, creating a simple yet emotionally rich piece.

Right from the opening lines, Mai Huong mentions the word "mother" from her early childhood as an irreplaceable source of support. This short but meaningful detail shows how the feeling of maternal love is expressed through small, everyday actions.

The writing is touching, describing a mother.

In her essay, Mai Huong meticulously describes her mother, from her gentle face and familiar hair to her eyes and figure. The carefully chosen words show that this is not just a descriptive assignment, but also a way for her to express gratitude to the person who has been by her side every step of the way.

At the end of the piece, Mai Huong expressed her pride in being her mother's daughter and wished that time would slow down so that she could spend more time with her mother and cherish every moment with her parent.

The simple, pure writing moved the teacher, who decided to give her a 9. In her feedback, she called Mai Huong's work a "priceless gift"—a way of showing appreciation for the student's effort and the love she poured into every word.

"This essay is very touching and commendable. I would like to dedicate this essay to Huong's mother, Lan. I love Mai Huong so much!" , wrote teacher Nguyen Thi Loan in her concluding comment.

The teacher's comments on the essay.

When shared on the social media platform Threads, the essay quickly attracted nearly 10,000 likes in a short period of time.

In the comments section, many praised Mai Huong's neat handwriting and the sincere emotions she conveyed in each word. Some expressed surprise and emotion at seeing a primary school student write about her mother with such keen observation.

In addition, many praised the teacher's thoughtfulness in leaving gentle yet heartfelt comments. Many netizens commented that this was "an essay where both the writer and the grader are adorable," creating a heartwarming story for the reader.

Giang Pham

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